Silent Comeback
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Army jets fly low in the thick darkness
spraying ray of light from the sky
the train chugs and screams as it draws to a halt
people alight laughing
the school bell rings
Children walk home playing on the roadside
the door bell rings
am home again
welcome,
home again , wow.
what a cute and brilliant piece.
Cheers.
Happy Rally.
A nice snapshot for those moments.
A time of positive memories. Beautiful. How have you been?
thanks Dan, I have been ok, just channeling energies
. how have you been?
i have been too well, that i couldn’t write
but hey am back now. how are you 
Very lovely =)
I like the image this creates in my head, especially the part about the train. Excellent poem.
Home is where we all belong to. But, the journey home give us a different scene at different stop. Well grasped.
Interesting mix of images. Thanks for sharing.
thank you for..and for leaving your mark
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Love and Light..
Just stopped by to let you know that the poem that you allowed me to post on my site is up today. Thank you again.
thanks for the feed back am checking it out
love and light
I like the way you focus in more and more, until arriving home.
I appreciate